Tuesday, November 17, 2009

Kristin's Still Life

1 comment:

  1. What works, the shapes are varied enough to create interest in the arrangement. The black in the shapes, the bow and center of flower unite the background with foreground.

    This still life could use a bit of cropping, the space around the objects, particularly on the right, is over powering the objects. Lower lighting might allow for more detail to be seen. I'd like to see the box with the ribbon turned around so that the bow was at the top. One of the boxes could be turned so that they weren't both pointing in the same direction, which is out of the picture frame.

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